I worry when someone goes into the hospital
Kidneys shutting down
Liver shutting down
We don’t know why
may never know whywhywhywhywhy
haven’t we had enough of this already
once the dying starts, it doesn’t stop
Clogged arteries are blocked lifelines
legs becoming starved for oxygen
good news
he has periphery veins
and leg pains
bad news
if they are cut off, there will oxygen galore
in the form of gaping wounds
exposure and air restored
haven’t we had enough of this already
all the stops have been removed
let us commence with the dying
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July 13, 2009 at 11:34 am
poeticgrin
Holy crap… for some reason I was expecting a happy poem today, but what you’ve posted is what I’d consider one of your strongest poems to date.
*haven’t we had enough of this already*
July 13, 2009 at 7:26 pm
Snooty
Hmpht.
July 14, 2009 at 4:11 am
jessiecarty
wow! what a fresh new way to write about death and hospitals. Impressed!