In an effort to reconcile his true feelings
with the rules of genteelism
he told her he would love to go with her to the Department Store.
He walks down the aisles
diligently attentive
knowing aisles are more than aisles
and isles are more than isles
he doesn’t like either very much.
So they spent winter in the Tropics
while he dreamed of wheat and farms
the sweet, welcoming smell of manure
welcoming because it’s honest
and it’s been a while.
So they spent the spring in the Alps
where he dreamed of sweaty Southern sunsets
and he told her
tomorrow
perhaps we should lunch at the Café on the Corner.
Yes?
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July 14, 2009 at 9:26 am
PoeticGrin@aol.com
YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! My favorite you’ve ever written. What’s gotten into you?
July 14, 2009 at 9:51 am
medicatedlady
I’m in a Crazy Place.
July 14, 2009 at 6:50 pm
Paul
Yes. So many landscapes, so gently and strangely woven together. A fascinating piece.
July 15, 2009 at 2:01 pm
jessiecarty
wonderful! i love when a poem captures a moment. it is like a little photograph and the voice being less i i i as many poets (me SOO included) do.
July 16, 2009 at 3:33 pm
medicatedlady
Thank you, Bryan, Jessie, and Paul. This one came to be lightning fast and was different from most of the rest. I wasn’t sure where it was going when I started writing. Those are sometimes the most delightful and satisfying pieces.
July 23, 2009 at 5:47 pm
Tel
I love it when people incorporate a sense of place in their poetry. This is *great* stuff!!!
July 26, 2009 at 4:16 pm
valbrussell
This. Is. A. Novel. It’s a good novel and it’ leads to some heavy duty places. You are standing on that precipice and you are feeling the breeze that comes from the place that holds the eloquence. Indeed, you are talented medicatedlady. 🙂