Dying Starts Here

I worry when someone goes into the hospital
Kidneys shutting down
Liver shutting down
We don’t know why

may never know whywhywhywhywhy
haven’t we had enough of this already

once the dying starts, it doesn’t stop

Clogged arteries are blocked lifelines
legs becoming starved for oxygen
good news
he has periphery veins
and leg pains
bad news
if they are cut off, there will oxygen galore
in the form of gaping wounds
exposure and air restored

haven’t we had enough of this already
all the stops have been removed
let us commence with the dying


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3 responses to “Dying Starts Here”

  1. poeticgrin Avatar
    poeticgrin

    Holy crap… for some reason I was expecting a happy poem today, but what you’ve posted is what I’d consider one of your strongest poems to date.

    *haven’t we had enough of this already*

  2. Snooty Avatar

    Hmpht.

  3. jessiecarty Avatar
    jessiecarty

    wow! what a fresh new way to write about death and hospitals. Impressed!

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