August 27, 2008.
I had told him how I felt and wanted. I wanted more. We’d made up. We are snuggled in bed. but he felt the need to talk to me about it. So he rolls over to my side of the cover and looks at me through the near-darkness and tells me he knows this isn’t what I want to hear but he says he has no affection to give me
August 28, 2008
Day of the Dead, recently deceased: him and me
August 27, 2009
He messaged me a day before the anniversary of our demise. He wondered if we were on speaking terms. 364 days he could have come around, apologized, anything. I needed him to help me find closure.
August 28, 2009
I told him, let me be.
April 8. I’ll have been in Arkansas 19 years. I still remember intervals of aching when it had been only 1 day, 3 months, 1 year in Arkansas.
April 3. Nearly 7 months and I finally think I’m ready to let go of the counting. Maybe acknowledge the year anniversary of our split when it comes (August 28). When we were together, I felt the clock winding down. Apart, I’ve counted up, endlessly up, there’s-no-ceiling up. I look down and happen to notice the date and I think, is this day significant in any way? The answer is the same. I made notations of when I saw him in last year’s calendar, and I had lunch with him on this day, April 2008. It was our 11th date. We only had 42 dates left.
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November 16, 2009 at 10:47 pm
Patrice
ouch. ouch. ouch.
You take me right there – right there where the (metaphorical) bruises still feel blue.
November 17, 2009 at 10:25 am
medicatedlady
For the longest time, I wrote letters to this man everyday after we broke up. Each day, each letter, was excruciating, but it allowed me to chronicle the stage of grief I went through. I wrote this post in April. I’m not sure why I didn’t post it then but I think it must not have been the right time (if there is such a thing).
November 17, 2009 at 12:21 pm
bindo
Sadness, sadness, sadness…
Always sadness…I guess that’s why I dig you so much
November 17, 2009 at 4:31 pm
poeticgrin
A brilliant piece of writing.
November 17, 2009 at 4:43 pm
medicatedlady
Bindo, sadness is the best thing about me.
Thanks, Bryan.
November 17, 2009 at 5:09 pm
Val
How come everyone else sees sadness and I see completion of a vital cycle of learning? 😉 It only feels like sadness.
November 18, 2009 at 12:34 pm
jessiecarty
i’m telling you, the heart-sick (snarky or no) romance verse novel is in your future!
and he sucks, btw 🙂
November 19, 2009 at 1:56 pm
PoeticGrin
How about a chapbook where poems are titled as dates over a period of one or two years? You’ve got most of these written.
November 19, 2009 at 5:12 pm
Val
I totally agree with both Bryan and Jessie! You could be the Candace Bushnell of dating cynicism and darkness! I like this idea and in my opinion, you have a much better sense of irony and humour than anything Bushnell could write. HUGS 🙂 You MUST consider doing this. If Bryan is my Oscar Wilde, you are definitely my Dorothy Parker.
November 21, 2009 at 10:54 am
Tel
You could do a chapbook on a countdown to dating, too. Actually, maybe not. I don’t always know what I’m talking about, and Bryan just schooled me in chapbooks yesterday. 🙂