You and the Dirt

Stickered existence
I was a victim of a drive-by
the brushing of a Holly tree
and the prickers lining the plastic leaves

The scrape of bark
nature’s equivalent to concrete
I will bleed and it will be sweet

And then there’s pine needles
and rocks
and caves
the dangers obvious
the consequences clear

Deep down it’s you and the dirt
no analogies
no depth
you and the dirt


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7 responses to “You and the Dirt”

  1. jessiecarty Avatar
    jessiecarty

    i’m so jealous! i want to write such simple words that sound so awesome together 🙂

    the second stanza is my favorite!

  2. That is a very cool poem. Very precise, great images and sounds. You should podcast this one. It is one of your best.

  3. Wow, yall, thanks!

  4. poeticgrin Avatar
    poeticgrin

    RE: Paul – M’Lady and I have a date to record some of our poetry this weekend. That is, if she survives her real date on Saturday night.

  5. Bryan: what’s a podcast? Please explain slowly so that I can understand.

  6. Beautifull!
    It is like orlando

    construction material plastic/fake

    There are Real Plant, tons
    but they prefer the plastic ones
    so they save the trouble
    to water them

  7. There’s something humorous in this at first, and then something foreboding. So much in a few lines! Nice.

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