Imagine if I weren't medicated….
June 23, 2009 in Poem | Tags: aging, becoming hard, becoming more fucked up, damage, fucked up, metal, oxidation, oxygen, rust, water
the metal and the water
oxidation
you’re fucked
rust
the older you are
the more air
the more oxidation
the more fucked
rusted
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June 23, 2009 at 10:06 am
Utopian Fragments
Lady, this is great.
June 23, 2009 at 12:34 pm
jessiecarty
I just LMAO! Awesome 🙂 that could have gone in my poems based on the periodic table of elements!!
June 23, 2009 at 3:43 pm
Jade
So true!
June 24, 2009 at 7:44 am
medicatedlady
Thanks all for the compliments.
Jessie–Who doesn’t love the periodic table? If I were an element, I’m not sure which one I’d be specifically, but definitely one of the most unstable. 😉
June 24, 2009 at 9:43 am
poeticgrin
I really like this one too. Blunt, harsh, to the point.
Can’t wait for Jessie’s above mentioned collection of elemental poems, too.
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June 23, 2009 at 10:06 am
Utopian Fragments
Lady,
this is great.
June 23, 2009 at 12:34 pm
jessiecarty
I just LMAO!
Awesome 🙂
that could have gone in my poems based on the periodic table of elements!!
June 23, 2009 at 3:43 pm
Jade
So true!
June 24, 2009 at 7:44 am
medicatedlady
Thanks all for the compliments.
Jessie–Who doesn’t love the periodic table? If I were an element, I’m not sure which one I’d be specifically, but definitely one of the most unstable. 😉
June 24, 2009 at 9:43 am
poeticgrin
I really like this one too. Blunt, harsh, to the point.
Can’t wait for Jessie’s above mentioned collection of elemental poems, too.