the metal and the water
oxidation
you’re fucked
rust
the older you are
the more air
the more oxidation
the more fucked
rusted
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June 23, 2009 at 10:06 am
Utopian Fragments
Lady,
this is great.
June 23, 2009 at 12:34 pm
jessiecarty
I just LMAO!
Awesome 🙂
that could have gone in my poems based on the periodic table of elements!!
June 23, 2009 at 3:43 pm
Jade
So true!
June 24, 2009 at 7:44 am
medicatedlady
Thanks all for the compliments.
Jessie–Who doesn’t love the periodic table? If I were an element, I’m not sure which one I’d be specifically, but definitely one of the most unstable. 😉
June 24, 2009 at 9:43 am
poeticgrin
I really like this one too. Blunt, harsh, to the point.
Can’t wait for Jessie’s above mentioned collection of elemental poems, too.