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oxidation

the metal and the water

oxidation

you’re fucked

rust

 

the older you are

the more air

the more oxidation

the more fucked

rusted

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5 responses to “oxidation”

  1. Utopian Fragments Avatar
    Utopian Fragments

    Lady,
    this is great.

  2. jessiecarty Avatar
    jessiecarty

    I just LMAO!
    Awesome 🙂
    that could have gone in my poems based on the periodic table of elements!!

  3. Jade Avatar
    Jade

    So true!

  4. medicatedlady Avatar
    medicatedlady

    Thanks all for the compliments.

    Jessie–Who doesn’t love the periodic table? If I were an element, I’m not sure which one I’d be specifically, but definitely one of the most unstable. 😉

  5. poeticgrin Avatar
    poeticgrin

    I really like this one too. Blunt, harsh, to the point.

    Can’t wait for Jessie’s above mentioned collection of elemental poems, too.

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