And so we’re here. The bitter end. My friend says drunkenly.
I’ve been living here for ages, I say in a sleep haze.
We talk for a few moments. We slur. It doesn’t matter how indecipherable the words are. We understand each other.
I think I drift off to sleep. He’s talking to other people at the bar. He tells me tips on dating that we both forget almost instantly.
Did I tell you about the dream I had the other night? The one about the woman who said my credit card was rejected and judged me harshly when I asked her to run it again, that there must be a mistake? I ask.
Ooooh-we-oooh I look just like Buddy Holly, oh-oh and you’re Mary Tyler Moore, he sings over me.
I think I mean to shrug my shoulders, but instead I fall asleep again.
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February 9, 2009 at 2:31 pm
PoeticGrin
Wow – what a nice prose piece! This works very well. I wonder if others will enjoy or if you had to be there?
February 9, 2009 at 6:27 pm
Paul
I enjoyed it, it was like being there at the end of a wild night. Beautifully written.
February 10, 2009 at 8:43 am
medicatedlady
Thank you both!
February 10, 2009 at 10:25 am
Marcy
I was there. You brought me there. I thoroughly enjoyed watching the scene unfold. Especially:
“I’ve been living here for ages …”