The punchline wasn’t the real punchline
Or at least it wasn’t funny
She wept.
Like most things
It’s what comes after the punchline that matters most
She wept.
For him.
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6 responses to “punch”
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Again you set my mind whirling…with your provocative verse…I love how you are able to make one consider something in so few lines.
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Thank you very much. This one has been lurking around the periphery for some time now…I finally caught enough of the content to put it on paper.
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And she’s BACK!
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this totally seems like the opening to something. like a set of poems…mystery!
glad to have you back 🙂
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This is interesting to me because last night my exchange told me a joke about Kentucky that did not make any sense and, mostly, was just a horrible attempt at making a stereotypical reference to being toothless and inbred. Your poems sums how I felt, minus the crying…
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ML – great to have you back around (though the cleaning lady you left ws hilarious)
wonderful poem – punches you
punches you hard
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