Let the snow fall down, half a foot
let the rain fall down, half an inch
freeze, five hours
serve with slippery roads
and unbecoming falls from grace.
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7 responses to “How to Make a Cake”
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If falls = cakes, you’d own a bakery!
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haa.. the beauty of the snow melting with car wheels. damn it is a marvellous site.
but i better be on the beach right now. -
can you substitute in’s for un’s?
what about subbing ary for ery
how about using metric units instead of foots and inches (scratch this last one, foots and inches does fit better)
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Really cool! let me be cheesy for once at least, I need to tell you that you are very creative. Great poem indeed.
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perfect poem!
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I prefer my cake in ball form, dipped in chocolate. I’m just sayin…
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If snow is cake, then, like Lil Kim said, “Believe me, sweety, I got enough to feed the needy.”
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