he did what he did
but I still think of him fondly
when I opened the door
I took his breath away
something most unexpected
something so surprising
even to him
to the both of us
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5 responses to “what he did”
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surprises comes when letting the doors open. god needs a space to come in…
been absent from here for too long, i think…
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this sounds like an opening to a really sexy set of poems…has anyone thought of doing a romance verse novel? i bet you could write it!
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Thanks for your comment, utopian. I always feel honored when you check out my site.
Jessie, I don’t know…I think I could do a sarcastic heartache verse novel, but straight up romance? I guess it’s all romance in a way…
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I’d be all up for a sarcastic heartache verse novel, it could even poke fun at romance novels….i’m channeling VC andrews now..hahaha
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What is romance without the occasional time honored sarcastic heartache? I love this, M’lady
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