My mother gave me pictures of her
and her son
both dead
We all die sooner or later
No one comes into the world
thinking she will suffer a lingering, painful death
or that he will die of a ruptured ulcer
We all die quickly or slowly
We all die of trivial things
which is not supposed to happen
or so our rebellious minds wail
She gave me pictures
of a dead woman and her dead son
They are still in the envelope
what’s left of a dead woman and her son
Where to bury the bodies
Where to put the ashes
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July 2, 2009 at 3:12 pm
Tel
I like this. It reminds me of what I often find myself thinking: we never come to stay.
July 2, 2009 at 3:38 pm
jessiecarty
Fantastic opening 🙂
July 2, 2009 at 9:33 pm
medicatedlady
Thanks, Tel & Jessie.
I keep thinking: photos of the dead are not for the living. I don’t know what to do with the pictures my mother gave me, so they are laying on the coffee table and are looming both physically and mentally. I will be glad to be gone for July 4th festivities if for no other reason than I will be away from those pictures. I can’t part with them or ignore them but I can’t face them, either.
July 3, 2009 at 6:46 am
valbrussell
Sometimes the putting away of the photos is the burial. This is exceptional and each line is potent.
July 3, 2009 at 9:46 am
poeticgrin
“We all die of trivial things” – I really like this line… even in grand, fiery deaths, we can whittle our end down to some minute detail which ultimately stopped our heart.
July 3, 2009 at 9:03 pm
1writegirl
Bryan is right, there is no death that is somehow greater than another, no death even, more honorable. Death does not play favorites.
July 4, 2009 at 2:15 am
mariana
Sounds really good!
I think we are all dying all of the time, this won’t change until the universe changes it’s rules (which I don’t think is going to happen soon)