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To My Dearest, Part 2

*Written by emerging poet extraordinaire, Straight Up Carol

To my dearest.

Fuck you for leaving me.  I actually loved you. 

I actually loved you and that is why I am hurting so much

even now after all this time.

You seem to be doing fine and I am still openly hurting.

Fuck you for not loving me enough
 
maybe you didn’t even love me at all. Fuck you.

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5 responses to “To My Dearest, Part 2”

  1. lamarj72 Avatar
    lamarj72

    Right to the point. I rather like this one.

  2. Paul Avatar
    Paul

    Very direct and powerful. “You seem to be doing fine,” makes it hurt so much worse.

  3. Bindo Avatar
    Bindo

    Do I know you?
    Hehehehehe
    Ah yass, haven’t we all felt this way
    At one time or another

    Bindo

  4. Chris Avatar
    Chris

    I haven’t left you wifey!

  5. medicatedlady Avatar
    medicatedlady

    Thanks, I will forward comments to Straight Up Carol.

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