A year ago
We were the apple of their eyes
Blissfully festering in the corners
Pretending to be shadows without substance
Then
Floaters becoming unavoidable and brash blotches
Eye whites smeared yellow and veined
red
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4 responses to “Floaters”
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Lady,
I truly love this new voice you present us lately. It suits you not less than the sarcastic, humoristic one, and both are filled with thoughts. -
Much love and thanks, Dhyan, my tireless supporter.
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I must admit that I have been very bad about checking out my friends work out here in cyberspace, yours included. Just sitting here with my coffee, reading your stuff, feeling like we are related.
I agree with D on the voice but it’s something else too. I don’t need to put my finger on it but I dig it..
Peace
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Thank you much.
And…it’s not just a feeling. We ARE related, aren’t we? Isn’t gloom sometimes stronger than dna?
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