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I haven’t tagged my posts in a while
I don’t want to be found
I don’t want to be found out

If I lay in wait
I will wait in lies
Because I never remember which is correct
Lie or lay
So I lie or lay
And am laying or lying
One of the two

An ending to something not exquisite
Seems inappropriate
But three stanzas seems fair
And maybe it’s just enough to lull the audience
Into comments positive, if undeserving

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5 responses to “tag”

  1. Tel Avatar
    Tel

    Consider me lulled. You always do a great job creating a rhythm in the flow of your words, and that’s what I like most about this one.

  2. slpmartin Avatar
    slpmartin

    Ha…very clever.

  3. jessiecarty Avatar
    jessiecarty

    never could figure out that whole lay or lie thing 🙂

  4. bindo Avatar
    bindo

    Oh the lulling lies which lay on the broken bed, bleeding and stranded waiting to be tagged by the hunter
    Hahahahahaha

  5. Dhyan Avatar
    Dhyan

    Hey!!!! I hate that one too
    and I quit tabbing too
    wow
    what a something

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