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Honey, Sweet from the Hive

Honey
sweet from the hive
never mind the swarm
thick skin
be damned
go where the action’s at
kill.
the.
nerve.
numb.the.skin.

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8 responses to “Honey, Sweet from the Hive”

  1. Jessie carty Avatar
    Jessie carty

    Has a kewl jazzy feel 2 it 🙂

  2. marianasoffer Avatar
    marianasoffer

    I like this short poem very much, let me add a random line at the end> kill the nerve / numb the skin
    take care medicated

  3. Bryan Borland Avatar
    Bryan Borland

    I’ve always thought of you as swarmy, full of honey and death.

    OOOH @ Mariana’s line.

  4. Bryan Borland Avatar
    Bryan Borland

    Also, this works well as an acrostic.

  5. Bryan Borland Avatar
    Bryan Borland

    In some other language.

  6. Patrice Avatar
    Patrice

    I like the edginess of this – but –

    I want to know why Bunny is in the tags…????

    Is it this Bunny?

    (\__/)
    (=’.’=) This is Bunny. Copy and paste Bunny into your
    (“)_(“) signature to help her gain world domination.

  7. Bryan Borland Avatar
    Bryan Borland

    Damn, Patrice can create art even through the keyboard! Show off! 🙂

  8. medicatedlady Avatar
    medicatedlady

    Oh Patrice. I do love your bunny.

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