A Point Beared

a sharpened pencil
literally to the point
the one I have becomes dull after the first stroke
I bear down too hard
my point is more unfocused than I mean for it to be


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5 responses to “A Point Beared”

  1. jessiecarty Avatar
    jessiecarty

    very haiku-esque ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. very good

    love this

  3. You are sharp and so is this, therefore I declare you do NOT need a sharpie pen. I really liked this and I’ve read it a total of nine times over two days so there!

  4. Jessie, blonderblondest, Val–thanks so much. I am honored.

  5. I like it too.

    Sharp, like you. Pointed and pointing out.

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