Traitor: An Acknowledgement, Nothing Profound

My friend says, “you’re not a traitor.” And it touches me in a way that I can’t quite define, except to say it’s a mixture of relief and grief and something else. Because I miss him. The first one, I mean. I miss smiling.

 

I have a secret memory

I won’t share

but it still makes me laugh

and hurt

because it happened


Comments

7 responses to “Traitor: An Acknowledgement, Nothing Profound”

  1. poeticgrin Avatar

    OOOOH again I say this friend is just God-like. Perhaps a religion which hoists him up to be worshipped is in order?

    I have a secret memory/I won’t share/but it still makes me laugh/
    and hurt/because it happened

    Also, how poetic would it be to have this on your tombstone? Not suggesting this should occur anytime soon, of course.

  2. poeticgrin Avatar

    Also – people: recognize using the same line to write a poem was not planned and just happened.

  3. poeticgrin Avatar

    Also – you don’t want to compete against us in board games.

  4. poeticgrin Avatar

    Oh my god – are we like a pop duo now – like Simon and Garfunkle or George Michael and the Other guy?

  5. Seals and Crofts….Hall and Oats…Rocky and Bullwinkle

    Your last verse does indeed say it all.
    I love this..because it hurts…

    Perhaps a good tombstone..My own…”Here in hell the coffee’s cold; they thought of everything”

  6. I quite enjoy both of those epitaths.

Leave a comment