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Unfinished: The Haikus

Haiku Poems: On What I Won’t Experience with the New Him

 

fingers through your hair

the feel of just-mown lawn grass

sparks fly with my touch

 

so you want to go back

Japan is lovely I hear

no more me to see

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3 responses to “Unfinished: The Haikus”

  1. watermaid Avatar
    watermaid

    Thank you for visiting my blog and for your encouraging words. You too can do much with a few words. You convey an intense ache at the prospect of imminent loss.

  2. PoeticGrin Avatar
    PoeticGrin

    I love the use of the word “mown” – double meaning, awesomeness.

    Watermaid, above, clearly knows you already.

  3. medicatedlady Avatar
    medicatedlady

    Thank you both. Intense ache, imminent loss. Yes.

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