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I don’t remember you, and I’m sorry

instead,

my head is filled with thoughts and memories

of people not worth remembering

not worth considering

I see his eyes, dark, and alive

and yours, dark, and dead

 

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    poeticgrin

    I like the contrast of dark and alive vs. dark and dead – how the darkness can have duel meanings.

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    poeticgrin

    After what you told me, what a poem.

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