Severe Angles. Or Emptiness Incarnate

The camera

has tight angles

severe

the way I see the world

in black and white

or monotone gray

all or nothing

you or me

love, hate, indifference, regret

upset

the feeling of being a non-person, non-self, non-identity

walking through my life, a stranger

emptiness incarnate

 


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One response to “Severe Angles. Or Emptiness Incarnate”

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    poeticgrin

    I like the rhythm of the last line, how it shifts in length from the previous two lines and leaves you with a thud, of sorts.

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